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Tuesday, April 15, 2014

Show Not Tell Setting

Sharon is 11 yr's old and play's soccer she hate's to clean her own room . One day she forgotten her Knee pads somewhere in her room. She is to disorganized to keep her room clean. She couldn't find her knee pad in her cupboard or in her closet.

I reached under her bed to see if my Knee-pads were there. Under her bed she couldn't see any thing but Darkness. So she puts her hand under bed and pulls out clothes .Finding her Knee pads she was getting to worried that she won't find her Knee pads in time for her championship game.


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