On
Friday it was picnic day for how hole school . As we started walking
along a line Mr Burt was leading us to point England beach. wear we
have the picnic. And it was fun. because people was convoy of chaotic
crazy children's running around the Field . As we were walking suddenly
it was about to rain but we still walked in a line and children were
still running around and talking then we got to the beach.
Mr Burt was telling us the rules where to go and why because
When
we got there Mr Burt told the hole school wear to play,sit,eta.and go
toilet. Then when he finish explaining we all started to find a please
to sit and when we finish finding a spot to sit on we started to play
around the field and when we were playing around I saw efilona she was
next to the music and it was to loud that I couldn't hear efilona speak.
and when we were siting down and listening to music we were so tired
that we wanted to go down to the beach.
As
we got there I saw wakatere. bronq martha they were playing together .
And then I saw Kaycee playing by her self on the water and I wanted to
go play with her so I did.Then me an Kaycee were playing throws she
always throw it to the deep end. and then I went to the sand and I saw a
ball and I thought I am alwayed to play with it so I talk it . then I
went in the water and we rolled it to each other then Kaycee throws the
ball to the other side of the deep end and me and Kaycee had how
uniform on so the teacher didn't let me and Kaycee get it. Suddenly Mr
Harris came from no wear and ran in to the beach and he saw the ball and
he started to run in the beach and he reached for the ball and he got
it and he throw it to Ms V and Ms V grueled at Kaycee and Mr Harris was
splashing water at me and Kaycee when Ms V went.
After
that we went up to the field and we were so hungry then Mr J said "
there is same fruit fall you 's . and there were plums apple peaches" an
water. when I got a fruit It was so yummy and I had five plums and one
peach. and it was good.
before
it was so fun because we had no school work so on picnic they was like a
free time we get to do everything and we get to play around a and
listen to music that was my best day ever.
I felt excited on the first they of picnic it was so fun and my hole school gets to play every wear cool. the end
Hi Sisilia,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your story about the picnic it was very interesting.I liked the way you added detail to you story.Keep it up.