1: lollies will make kids teeth rot, turn black and fall out. Brushing your teeth is really important so your teeth will not fall out. If your teeth rot you might need to wear fake teeth when you get older.
2: If children eat too much lollies they might get sick. They might also get a lumpy tongue.Their throats might get sore from eating and swallowing too.
3: It has a lot of sugar in it and it will make your stomach hurt.
They might get sent to the doctor because of their eating too much lollies.
4: They can get you fat from eating heaps of lollies especially
chocolate. Lollies aren’t good for people because of the amount of sugar it has in it. Cut down on chocolate and lollies because it will make you bigger and its not healthy.
5: Lollies have too much sugar and it can make kids hyper and it will affect their behaviour and their skin. It might affect your taste buds and might cause disease. Don’t eat too much because another thing in your body might hurt too.
Hello Sisilia
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